Bofo
Bofo's bright red nose glows all night.
His blue lips are as dark as a bottom of the sea.
His pink top hat is as cute as a button.
His lollie pop bow tie makes him look like a responsible man.
The unique and evil face stares at me.
His face fills up with laughter.
Awesome story Abbey
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I like how you described how Bofo was laughing.
you have done a great job Abbey
I like how you put in lots of similes that described Bofo and and I liked the first sentence that said that Bofo's bright red nose glows all night. But I think you have too much similes.
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